Peer Feedback Reflection

Category	Summary of Peer Feedback	Issue I Understood	My Response & Modifications
1. Unclear Spatial Structure	“What’s the flow of the space?” “Is it now or future?” “Sections? Areas?”	The spatial circulation and logic (in terms of time and emotion) between modules were not clearly presented visually.	➤ Add a circulation diagram in the main visual. ➤ Clearly define the temporal setting as a “post-gender speculative society.” ➤ Provide a 3D zoning diagram (Entrance / Main Hall / Theater / Corridor / Exit).
2. Disconnection Between Theory and Space	“You have a lot of theory… but I don’t see the connection.” “It’s a concept now?”	The translation of theory into spatial experience was not shown, making it feel like pure text rather than an immersive design.	➤ Create a tri-axis diagram of “Theory × Mechanism × Space.” ➤ Attach key theoretical terms to each spatial installation (e.g., “Exploding balloon = masculine structural pressure”).
3. Vague Expression / Semantic Jumps	“Did you change the topic?” “From masculinity to VR?” “How is it equal if most is about men?”	My narrative moved too quickly with insufficient background, causing misunderstandings—such as the impression of favoring one gender.	➤ Add a preface stating: “This project focuses on how structures shape male identity—not who deserves more sympathy.” ➤ Emphasize: “Technology is used to expose identity-building mechanisms, not to shift away from the theme.”
4. Too Much Text / Lack of Visuals	“Very text heavy” “More visuals needed” “Where do your colours come from?”	Excessive theoretical description without enough visual support made it hard for the audience to grasp the design intention.	➤ Reformat all pages: Only one key statement per page, plus 1–2 supporting visuals. ➤ All color choices to be derived from spatial mechanisms, not decorative logic.
5. Unclear Position / Brand Identity	“Who is the audience?” “What’s your brand?” “What does being a man mean to you?”	I failed to communicate the project’s ideological stance and how my values are embedded in the spatial experience.	➤ Add a “Brand Story” page to clarify: this is a spatial system that resists structural gender scripts and supports gender fluid empathy. ➤ Clearly state: I am not telling others how to be men, but asking—do you have the freedom to choose?

Final Major Project: Element 2 // Communication & Reflection (Presentation Feedback, Debates, Adjustments) Classroom Production Timeline

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